"Indy Car is sad to announce that Dan Wheldon has passed away from unsurvivable injury (sic)."
Dan Wheldon didn't pass away. He died. He died from injuries suffered in a crash during the race.
This is important.
Strong and successful leaders must to be able to deliver bad news, even when its heartbreaking. Saying that Wheldon "passed away" is weak and makes it sound as though the horror of what hundreds of thousands of people watched live was something other than horrific.
I'm not advocating a heartless, cold or clinical description of this type of incident. I'm advocating reality. Here's how Tom Brokaw announced the death of his friend and colleague Tim Russert:
I'm not advocating a heartless, cold or clinical description of this type of incident. I'm advocating reality. Here's how Tom Brokaw announced the death of his friend and colleague Tim Russert:
Brokaw was direct, to-the-point and factual. We understood the magnitude of the tragedy from the simple clarity of his language.
Dan Wheldon's nickname on the racing circuit was "Lionheart." Wheldon earned that nickname from other drivers who said he raced with his heart, and not his head. The least the CEO of Indy Car could do when he stepped behind the mic is announce Dan's death with the same amount of heart as Dan used behind the wheel.
Bill Salvin
Bill Salvin